Latest topics
» Magic Tricks
Tue Mar 22, 2011 10:31 pm by Azmot

» Azmot
Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:22 pm by Renzenku

» Heyo!
Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:11 am by Grimble

» Glutton's Spirit Ribbons
Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:03 pm by Renzenku

» Glutton's Trident
Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:02 pm by Renzenku

» Glutton's Base Skills
Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:01 pm by Renzenku

» Glutton
Sat Jan 15, 2011 1:59 pm by Renzenku

» Lost [Open]
Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:55 am by EvelynFate

» It's been a hard day's night. | Open to anyone
Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:30 am by Gamma Alpha Omega

» Lost...
Thu Nov 25, 2010 9:29 pm by Ezrion Alexander

Guild of Leaders
Administrators
 
 
Moderators
 
Friends of the Site
free forum
free forum
free forum
 

Tsubame Gaeshi

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:26 pm

Name: Tsubame Gaeshi

Requirements: None, just require a weapon of any kind.

Class: Purely Offensive

Element: N/A (Yes People! Pure technique!)

Effect:
Do note that the sword is just a basic weapon to be used but Kaoru can also use other weapons to use this technique as well. The damage and speed of this technique’s execution is phenomenal and indescribable as it bypasses both physical armor and magical/energy armor, no matter what kind of material or energy is used to enhance it. Distance, space, sight, purely undetectable invisibility is also not an issue with this technique, due to the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon which creates openings to parallel universes, Kaoru is able to detect you even if your body, spirit or any kind of power which makes you invisible in this universe but on the other he can still sense it. Literally speaking, it hits where it hurts aka Pure Damange.

It is possible to break out of the technique but this requires great amounts of concentration not to mention a high speed to break off from it. Dodging is also possible but it depends on the luck, agility and flexibility of a person. The minimum slashes for this technique is three while the maximum is ten. It also drains tremendous amounts of energy on Kaoru thus Kaoru needs to let his body rest or not to strain it much for three posts before he could use this again.

History:
Kaoru didn’t really receive this skill it’s just something that Kaoru was playing with and tried with some worthless demons. He was fond of playing the one on one battle as that was much more his forte than that of area damage techniques. Kaoru rarely use this skill though, making it a sight to behold once he unleashes it. Kaoru did give this statement to a demon before it died by his hands. “There is no escape.. The more you run.. The more I have fun in killing you..”


Last edited by Kaoru on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:35 am; edited 3 times in total
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Ezrion Alexander on Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:32 pm

If you were to go up agaianst someone ese who could travel through dimensions (practically everyone on this site) and they block the slash in the other dimension, would it still continue into this one? Or would the other two slashes continue? And how does in pass armor? Your driscription isn't clear enough.

_________________
I am that which come's in the dark, to snuff out the light. I am that which causes the bravest of men to cower on the ground. I am worse than death itself. I am FEAR!
avatar
Ezrion Alexander
Fate's Destruction

Posts : 499
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Cornwall, Ont. Canada

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:52 pm

The problem now is can they? As I know, we all are dimensional travellers, blocking is possible but the possibility for that is low but still possible. Yes the two other slashes will continue. As to block it you need to know the mechanism of how Kaoru uses it first. Well that’s my way of thinking.

Ahh the passing armor part.. Physical is actually very easy to explain as armor be it large or small has spaces in between them, this skill literally makes the term “Space” non-existent, opening the doors of infinite possibilities for this technique to hit its target. The magical/energy armor is the tricky part to explain. Imagine this, as you have a magical armor used on yourself, when an attack comes to you, the attack will be merely stoped before hitting your skin but remember as this technique literally makes “Space” non-existent it creates what we will call a tiny, minute portal, gap, opening, whatever you call it, to make the damage able to pass the armor.
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Ezrion Alexander on Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:54 pm

If someone were to detect this portal,opening or whatever you wish to call it, would they be able to seal it?

_________________
I am that which come's in the dark, to snuff out the light. I am that which causes the bravest of men to cower on the ground. I am worse than death itself. I am FEAR!
avatar
Ezrion Alexander
Fate's Destruction

Posts : 499
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Cornwall, Ont. Canada

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:46 am

Possible but let me ask.. How many can you seal, plus as all of us can open portals and maintain our own portals. But the main thing is the portals only open when the sword starts to swing or the technique starts to initiate, thus the time interval between the portal opening and the sword swinging is nearly and very close instantaneous. Shall I state a weakness if you want to make this skill less G-mod in a way?
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Renzenku on Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:32 pm

I'm heading this question since I noted something about this technique; You do need to tone down its capabilities. You can't be allowed to have a move that not only is impossible to dodge; but is impossible to block with anything physical or magical. That needs to be edited to be less G-Mod.

State what weakness you think may work to make this balanced but it is far to powerful as of this moment. In fact up until the part where you said it's impossible to dodge with anything physical or magical it sounded like a normal combo that you made extremely hard to dodge.

_________________
My Friends are my power. Never expect me to be without my power; for so long as I live I shall have them close to my heart...
avatar
Renzenku
Eternity's Revival

Posts : 608
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Unknown Location In Alternate Reality

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:53 pm

Possible to dodge but as you can see.. Where will the strike or slash hit? That is the main question but I’ll state where I hit of course. As for the weakness, I can’t really state all but I’ll state two. First, this technique requires a level of foundation to execute it. Second, I can’t use it while in mid-air or any other weapon other than a sword or blade which is without enhancements (meaning that no other skill, technique and sword abilities are all nullified during this technique).
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Renzenku on Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:54 pm

Can it be blocked with a physical blade or physical armour?

If not is there a logical reason for this?

_________________
My Friends are my power. Never expect me to be without my power; for so long as I live I shall have them close to my heart...
avatar
Renzenku
Eternity's Revival

Posts : 608
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Unknown Location In Alternate Reality

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:31 am

Ahh.. Well it's simple, as you know this technique uses the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon which essentially creates openings into parallel universes, thus eliminating the term of "Space". As we know that Armor has some parts or "spaces" in between them from our skin thus the attack can literally bypass a physical blade or armor.
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Renzenku on Sat Jul 10, 2010 3:12 pm

You're making a move that once it connects can be unlimitly strung as a massive combo and be impossible to break out of or dodge or block. Just so you know.

_________________
My Friends are my power. Never expect me to be without my power; for so long as I live I shall have them close to my heart...
avatar
Renzenku
Eternity's Revival

Posts : 608
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Unknown Location In Alternate Reality

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Solomon Black on Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:14 pm

I will not approve this as it is. Change it to make it possible to dodge, block, break out of once it goes off. Also give it a length, like can nly be used up to ten slashes, and needs a cooldown period.

_________________
Some call me king, some call me messiah, some even go to call me god, but I tell them. I am only a man.
avatar
Solomon Black
The True Human

Posts : 300
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Venician Merc Hideout

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:22 pm

Added this:

It is possible to break out of the technique but this requires great amounts of concentration not to mention a high speed to break off from it. Dodging is also possible but it depends on the luck, agility and flexibility of a person. The minimum slashes for this technique is three while the maximum is ten. It also drains tremendous amounts of energy on Kaoru thus Kaoru needs to let his body rest or not to strain it much for three posts before he could use this again.

Would this suffice?
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Renzenku on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:25 pm

Yes it will. But you may want to edit the first paragraph to make it fit:
Originally it was a sword attack technique that consists of three literally concurrent slashes. It is not inevitable just highly unlikely, you have no escape from this technique. Once it’s activated as it utilizes the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon which essentially create openings into parallel universes, thus one can interact with the other sides with this gap. The three slashes are only the standard number of slashes of this technique (meaning he can do more). Furthermore, Kaoru can utilize this technique by using stabs, feints and any other ways of using the sword.
Probably be best to completely remove that paragraph instead of putting Original in front of it.

_________________
My Friends are my power. Never expect me to be without my power; for so long as I live I shall have them close to my heart...
avatar
Renzenku
Eternity's Revival

Posts : 608
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Unknown Location In Alternate Reality

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:36 pm

Bump
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Renzenku on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:38 pm

Approved I suppose; but as always abuse of this technique may get it removed from your ability.

_________________
My Friends are my power. Never expect me to be without my power; for so long as I live I shall have them close to my heart...
avatar
Renzenku
Eternity's Revival

Posts : 608
Join date : 2010-02-16
Location : Unknown Location In Alternate Reality

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Kaoru on Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:59 am

Noted.. >.> Although i havent use any skills yet..
avatar
Kaoru
Fallen Inquisitor

Posts : 130
Join date : 2010-03-25
Location : Somewhere..

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Tsubame Gaeshi

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top


 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum